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 # eDF Release 'PoC' [WiP]
 
-This is a preliminary README just sketching the structure of work - when we reach the 'PoC' milestone it will be replaces by an main documentation entry point for our customers who want to consume the 'edf_poc' product.
+This is a preliminary README in 'WiP' state - it's just sketching the story and structure of work.
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+When we reach the 'PoC' milestone it will be replaced by a short and concise README as the main documentation entry point for our customers who want to consume the 'edf_poc' product.
 
 ## POC Content Structure